2015년 4월 27일 월요일

Midterm Essay Writing


1.   Intro

 

[Lets enter the topic(online shopping) from now on]
 

 The modern people living now are often described as the busiest creature ever. They are knocked down by so many works, works, and works. Actually they seem to have no time for themselves. To cure them, the technology has made something drawing them out of the misery. One of the special inventions is E-commerce which is called online shopping. It could provide modern people another buying option besides traditional shopping. All the shopping process can be done in your home through the internet.

 
 

 


[Global B2C E-Commerce (Online retailing)s booming]


The online shopping now seems to be highly emerging as you can see in the picture above. It shows the explicitly upward trend of new way of shopping. Even the growth rate is to be reduced a little amount, the sales are expected to grow continuously in the future.
 

Then, can it be the dominant way of shopping in the future? Lets have a look at some characteristics of online shopping mainly about benefits and costs. And there will be my recommendation about being smart shopper.
 

2.   Benefits of Online shopping

 

 

[This video shows how it is difficult to shop offline especially when time is running out.]

 
When you think of offline shopping (as seen above video), you can see how many benefits online shopping provides. Those factors are driving the enormous growth of online shopping as you can see in the graph above. Lets see what those are from now on.

 
2.1 Saving Time

 Definitely it saves your time. (Relatively with Traditional shopping as seen in the video above) The only thing you should do to buy something is just a couple of clicks. That means you dont need to spend your time browsing the stuffs back and forth on your feet.

 
2.2 Huge information accessible

 You might get just a few explanations by sales person when you visit the store. However, if you choose to shop online, you can easily access uncountable information which can help you comparing the prices, designs, features and so on.

 
2.3 No limit in time and place

 If you can access internet with any devices, you can do shopping anywhere and anytime. You dont need to worry about the distance and the closing hour of the store. It is no problem for online shopping because it runs 24/7.
 

2.4 Easy to get stuffs

 What makes online shopping more convenient is that the stuff you choose is going to be delivered just right to your home or wherever you are. And even its getting more faster so it takes much little time than before.

 

3.   Costs of Online shopping

 Weve just figured out what are the positive factors of online shopping. And now we are going to see what are the weakness and flaws of online shopping.

 
3.1 Physical experience

 The most critical drawback of online shopping is the lack of physical experience. No matter how hard it tries, it cant provide the tangible and intangible experiences the offline shopping gives. The atmosphere of the store, the impression of the real product, and most of all the joy of shopping is only available in the offline shop.

 
3.2 Annoying process

 It has somewhat annoying process to buy online also. For example, if you want to exchange the stuff with other size or get a refund, you have to pack it up on your own again and call the delivery man by making appointment. It can make you kind of stressful when you are busy to process it.

 
3.3 Waiting time

 Even though the delivery system has been highly developed, you still have to wait until it gets to your home. The time it takes differs according to the environmental factors such as weather, strikes of logistics, traffics and so on. It would be a problem if you need something urgently.
 

3.4 Personal Information

 There arising a huge issues about improper uses of your information you put to register the shopping mall. The membership program may give you a good chance of deal, but it also can trigger data spilling.

 

4.   Future way of shopping

 Weve found what are the benefits and costs of online shopping until now. Then, what do you see the future way of shopping? Is it going to be online or just be remained offline? In my opinion, even the online shopping is growing harder, it cannot be a dominant way of shopping. Following the factors I described before, there are some points which online shopping never overwhelm such as the physical experiences. Other things such as annoying process and waiting time, and personal information are going to be solved as the process getting developed. However, the physical experience is different thing not to be satisfied online. 

 

 

[This video shows how the smart shopper behave when doing shopping]

 


[This site introduces useful apps to help smart shopping like Best buy apps in the video]

 

To solve this problem, you need to be flexible and smart to use the both way of shopping. Because It can let you (1) take benefits and (2) reduce costs.

(1) Benefits you are mainly expected to get: Saving Time, Huge Information.
(2) Costs you are mainly expected to reduce: Physical Experiences

The flexible shopper is the one who uses the each channel as it is combined (as seen in the video). For example, when you decide to shop offline, just go and browse the items in person and get a great physical experience while you have all the information in your phone or tablet. Or you can search information and compare the prices before visiting the store. If it is more expensive to buy in store, you can just buy it online on the spot. These activities can save your time and expenses while attaining physical experiences. In that way, each way of shopping completes your shopping experience perfectly!

 

[Be the smart shopper!]

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